Novel Writing – Day Two

By on June 4th, 2008

(Note: This post was originally published at All Freelance Writing.)

Well, I haven’t given up on this first novel project after just one day, so that’s progress. Yesterday I had to think about characters. Today I had to start thinking more about settings, and the things I’ll need to research soon to flesh out the story as accurately as possible.

I’d already been keeping a little research list whenever ideas popped into my head, so that was easy. I think the one issue I faced was with settings – much of that involves me doing research (which I haven’t gotten to yet), so the setting notes I jotted down are rather vague for now.

While I’m not giving away plot details, I will share a bit about the settings and things I’ll be researching:

Settings

There will be two primary settings: the bar at a club in Philly and two neighboring apartments in one of the nearby but quiet city suburbs. This is actually the area where I live. I chose it partly for that reason (less research, I know more about the locals, etc.) and partly because some of our area details are actually perfect for the subtler plot points in the story.

Research

I can’t give away all of the things I’ll be researching, because it would give away story points. But here are a few of the things I’ll be looking into:

  • Bartending
  • Local wildlife in our suburbs
  • Small concealable knives (especially something fitting for a woman)
  • Diabetes (from insulin shots to food choices)
  • Female superheros (and no, the book doesn’t involve them – it’s something I need to research for a very tiny piece of dialog from a child)
  • Violence in Christian history
  • Polish immigration to the US after WWII
  • Psychological issues and reactions such as reactions to severe remorse, how fears are instilled through brainwashing or traditions, the thought process / justifications people have for killing, etc.
  • How blood is drawn and stored (such as for a blood drive)
  • Bar / club interiors (perhaps some first-hand research is in order!)
  • Philly murder and other violent crime rates (we’re generally pretty bad)

Keeping the Story Fresh

Yesterday I think I mentioned how it can feel like the story is playing in my mind like a movie. This isn’t the first time that’s happened. When I was working on my last novel outline (which I’ll be using to draft a book when these two outlines are completed), the same thing happened.

I was able to use that to not only keep the story fresh on my mind (hard to forget when you can literally visualize it), but I was able to pull up certain plot points “on demand.” I did that by essentially creating a running soundtrack for the book (helped that I was working with musicians more at that time). So I would associate certain scenes with certain songs, and when I wanted to work on something, I would simply listen to the song to be able to separate the scene I was dealing with mentally.

I haven’t done the soundtrack thing for this story yet, but considering the fact that I have most of the plot (even if not most of the individual scenes) laid out in my mind already, I think I may need to soon do that. Has anyone else done something like that when working on fiction, or am I just nuts?

And that’s all for today folks. Tomorrow I start briefly laying out the main plot points (most of which I already have in mind). Perhaps at some point soon after that I’ll run the overall concept by someone else privately for feedback and input.

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About Jennifer Mattern

Jenn is a professional blogger and freelance business writer. She has worked as a writer since 1999, and began blogging in 2004. She owns All Freelance Writing as well as several other sites and blogs covering indie publishing, social media, and small business. She expects to release her first book for freelance writers, The Query-Free Freelancer, in 2012 and she is the author of the Web Writer's Guide e-book series.

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