Seamless Editing

I recently had a discussion with several fellow editors about voice and style. Namely, when to leave it in and when to take it out. Every piece of writing has a natural voice to it. As an editor sometimes I have to make a decision about when to leave something that's not wrong, but could be written clearer, and when to rework a sentence from the ground up. Good editing is like good tailoring; the original might fit without falling down around its wearer's ankles, but with a nip and a tuck, it suddenly looks sharper–it just fits right.

Understanding an Author's Style

The first thing I do when working on a new writer's pieces is read the piece all the way through. This is important to ensure I understand that person's unique style and that I don't accidentally cut something they refer to later on. I also frequently print out the piece so that I can circle and underline areas I feel are important. I jot notes down in the margins and draw arrows between sections that are on similar topics.

Only after I've done all of that do I begin to change things.

Pass Two: Proofreading

On my second pass through a piece I look at word choice and check for common grammatical mistakes. I make sure the writer has used the right to, too or two and their, there or they're. I double check the spelling of any advanced vocabulary.

I also notate any sections that read less smoothly than others. A good way to pick out awkward phrases is to read the entire piece out loud; when I'm home alone, I do precisely that. If I'm working and there are other people around, I read silently but mouth the words.

Once I know which sentences need a bit of work, I'll begin the real work: cutting and re-sewing pieces together for that perfect fit.

Creating Seamless Copy

After a good editor has worked on a piece often even the writer can't tell exactly what was changed; they know it reads cleaner and that the words fit their meaning just a little more snugly, but without comparing it to the original it's hard to pinpoint precisely where a word was swapped out or comma removed.

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My name is Melissa Breau & I’m a Raleigh-based tea-drinker and dog aficionado. If you’re local, let me know—I’d love to grab a drink.

By day, I’m a keyboard junkie, and (shameless plug) craft killer marketing content for small business owners far and wide.

By night (and sometimes on the weekend) I help out at several nonprofits, teach my dog new tricks, and try to spend as much time outside in the sunshine as I can.

Before joining the world of marketing I spent several years at various publishing companies in NYC, including both magazine publishers and book publishers. I also earned my Masters in Publishing from Pace University.

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